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Concupiscence

I looked at her picture last night
Her image makes my heart race
Instantly my mind takes flight
Soaring across time and space

Lost in the warmth of her eyes
My fear and mistrust melt away
Of such beauty I only fantasize
No one before had such sway

Her sensual lips beckoning me
Painted red they ignite my passion
Just one sweet kiss is my plea
Our tongues in oral conjugation

Pale skin yearning to be touched
Reaching out I can feel her heat
I've a thirst waiting to be quenched
Lust for flesh she only can replete

To explore her, to delight in her
I crave the taste of her nectar  
To relish the scent of her myrrh
My dream is to be her petter

I looked at her picture last night
Her image makes my heart race
Instantly my mind takes flight
Soaring across time and space
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:iconravenmother1021:
Ravenmother1021 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
So very awe inspiring. I missed your work... glad to see you in full force. :)
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GrotesqueDarling13 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009  Professional General Artist
Beautiful piece Matt :hug: I love it. And I love the form you used for it, it fits the flow so nicely.

And the words you used, so vivid,
It paints a beautiful image inside the readers head.

Amazing job :heart:
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
Thank you so much Sheri. :hug:
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:icongrotesquedarling13:
GrotesqueDarling13 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009  Professional General Artist
:hug: You are soo welcome :heart:
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:iconevilpixie71:
evilpixie71 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Beautiful and seductive words, Matt! Any woman would be flattered to have a man speak so of her. :tighthug: :heart:
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
You flatter me. Thank you :) :hug: :smooch:
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:iconevilpixie71:
evilpixie71 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
:smooch: :tighthug: :turbopoke: :blowkiss:
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
You are sooo wickedly cute. Your wonderful
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:iconevilpixie71:
evilpixie71 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
haha..thank you for the compliments, Matt. You know I don't agree but it is too early in the morning to argue with you! :P :lol:

So here is a big :tighthug: for you because you are wonderful! :glomp:
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
Well I will have to continue working on that. :) One day you will be able to see the beautiful woman I see.
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:iconevilpixie71:
evilpixie71 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
:rose: :tighthug:
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:iconsamantha110293:
Samantha110293 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Writer
This is beautiful. The girl you're talking about is pretty damn lucky; I wish a guy would write about me like this! :blush: The only part that I don't like is the word "petter."
XD XD
Good job.
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Thank you so much :)
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:iconsamantha110293:
Samantha110293 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Writer
No prob. Thank YOU. XD
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:iconerika-faye:
Erika-Faye Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
This was so good! I love it :D the way you describe this girl is beautiful. :+fav:ing!! :heart:
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Thank you so much Erika! :hug:
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:iconerika-faye:
Erika-Faye Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
no problem Matt :D
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kecharakittie Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
sexay~
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
:) Thank you very much
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:iconkecharakittie:
kecharakittie Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
^^ you did a great job
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
You are very kind :)
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:iconkecharakittie:
kecharakittie Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
just being honest. :)
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
:hug:
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:iconkecharakittie:
kecharakittie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
:hug:
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:iconhazlehowl:
HazleHowl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful piece.
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Thank you so much :)
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:iconhazlehowl:
HazleHowl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I should think you for the lovely piece of literature.
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
You are so very sweet
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:iconhazlehowl:
HazleHowl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
*blush* thank you.
But I honestly mean it, it is a wonderful piece and I can relate to it to a certain extent.
You are very good with words.
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
:) Thank you so much. It means a great deal to me. :hug:
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:iconhazlehowl:
HazleHowl Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad ^_^ :hug:
Keep up the good work!
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XRosewaterX Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... *cough, cough,* I would personally think that this girl of which you speak of is something special :)
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Yes she is, very much so. Although it is very hard to convince her of that fact.
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XRosewaterX Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You actually make her feel special... no other guy has ever made her feel like you've made her feel, luv :rose:
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irishdragonfly7 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nicely done! It invokes wonderful imagry. (Sorry I cannot spell today)
Thank you for sharing.
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
My pleasure, I am so glad you liked it.
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irishdragonfly7 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed.. :)
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aquagirl7 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Writer
i love how sensual you make the poem, and considering what the title's definition is (yes i looked it up :p ) its perfect, the only thing i suggest is the first and last stanza (since their the same) change the words around slightly, it just sounds too cliche to me

idk i thought you'd might like some constructive criticism, i love it though, the imagery is quite vivid :)
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Thank you so much. I always like constructive criticism. I respect your opinions.
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:iconaquagirl7:
aquagirl7 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Writer
hehe anytime :)
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:iconnicolebauser:
NicoleBauser Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Photographer
If only this girl were real :)
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Oh but she is to me
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:iconnicolebauser:
NicoleBauser Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Photographer
Lucky girl :)
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Funny I would say lucky me. :)
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:iconnicolebauser:
NicoleBauser Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Photographer
She must really make you feel something special :)
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Yes she does. :)
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:iconnicolebauser:
NicoleBauser Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009   Photographer
Well, then. I'm officially jealous that this girl you speak of has inspired such great writing :)
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Wicciapardon Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Woooooooow. *whistles*

That is DAMN good! And I'm not saying that. I hardly EVER take an interest in poetry, but this. . . .this is GOOD!
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:iconmatthewsloan:
matthewsloan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Thank you very much! :)
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